STARTED: 02/09/2024

FINISHED: 9/26/25

The sequel "The Second Sight: The Devil and the Wheel" is now available!

You’re an urban legend in a county full of them.  When you were thirteen, you were found passed out in the road by one of the local cops. No missing persons report. No fingerprints on file. No memories. Just a name.

Oh, and some bizarre psychic powers. 

You're content with simplicity. You like your isolated cabin and helping Carter track down missing persons.  You know that in theory there are more people like you out there, but you've never wanted to look behind the curtain to find out.

However, with the disappearance of a local teen named Casey Powell and a recent attempt on your foster father's life, your serene, isolated life comes abruptly to its end and a new chapter begins.

(Content and trigger warnings at the bottom.)

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The Second Sight is an urban fantasy story, where you step into the role of a psychic whose strange powers have always separated them from others. Those same powers will drag you down the rabbit hole and into a world that is both familiar and foreign to everything you know. A world filled with magic, witches, fae, demons, and the unknown.

You can immerse yourself in the story by customizing your protagonist's general appearance, choosing how they interact with others, and whether you lean on logic or intuition to problem solve. There are three love interests planned (more may be added depending on player reception and feedback), the genders of which will be selected by the player upon meeting them.

Characters

Jacob Carter

Age: Late forties

Race: Human. Definitely.

Gender: Male

Temperament: Carter radiates grizzled, old bastard energy and despite being the least paternal person in the world, he is your adoptive father. While harsh and aloof on the surface, he is also fiercely protective of you and has bent over backwards to give a decent life to a kid that isn't even his. He doesn't talk about his life before coming to Herman County and you haven't asked him, though that might change soon enough...

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Renard/Rowan

Age: Appears to be in their late twenties or early thirties

Race: Human. Maybe.

Appearance: Tall and slender, pale ivory skin, white-blonde hair, and gold eyes.

Temperament: Playful and witty, talking to R always feels like a game of cat and mouse and you can never be sure which role is yours. Part sad clown, part trickster, and always maddening to work with, the only things you can be certain of with R is that they probably know what they're doing. Everything else is up in the air.

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Zander/Zora

Age: Late twenties/Early thirties

Race: Human. Mostly.

Appearance: Muscular and athletic, umber brown skin, black locs, grey eyes 

Temperament: Gentle and resolute, Z isn't what you imagine when you think of an agent of the mysterious Magic and Anomalies Bureau. Kind, soft-spoken, and exceedingly polite, Z is Carter's former apprentice and something about them puts the old man on edge.

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Unknown aka "The Kestrel"

Age: ???

Race: Definitely not human.

Appearance: Tall, beautiful, elegant, with black hair and blue eyes.

Temperament: The Kestrel is a complete unknown. It's impossible to say whether they are a lethal ally or deadly enemy, but either way they are a powerful dreamwalker. You don't know how long they've been watching you, but you're willing to bet that it's been longer than you're comfortable with.


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This story contains sexually suggestive material, violence, talk of abductions and abuse, and mature language. Not recommended for those under 18.

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StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5, Windows
Rating
Rated 4.8 out of 5 stars
(506 total ratings)
Authorspoiledsweet
GenreInteractive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsFantasy, LGBT, Mystery, Narrative, Romance, Story Rich, supernatural, Twine
Average sessionAbout a half-hour
LanguagesEnglish
InputsMouse

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Actual updated version of this game HERE

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I just finished the game and all I gotta say is, brooo omg I really loved this!! I'm really excited to start the next part :))

This was such a good read! The part with the shade in the forest genuinely creeped me out. Great work! You should be so proud.

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A solid 10 ✨

The story is easy to follow (and get interested in), and the characters are enticing. Love MCs dynamic with Carter

The way the story and the characters are written *chefs kiss*★⌒ヽ(●^、^●)

The second option on turn 195 gives a point towards snarky/sardonic instead of amiable/optimistic.

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Oh my gosh 😲, what happened to Carter?  Carter, my man don't die and bro if Carter dies I am going to end up crying in real life, 🥹. I love Carter so much like he is one of my favorite character.

It's Renard/Rowan, not Carter

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A lovely story, start to finish. :)

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What were your thoughts about Carter?

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This is so well written! So gripping and I couldn't put it down. I was miffed [REDACTED] didnt kiss me at the end though damnnnnn sksjsksj. That's just me being impatient though lmao. 

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Like, wow, this is really captivating and insanely good...I'm literally reading the whole book within 5 evenings. The way you use words, the humor you present, the scene descriptions, and plot transitions are so so tasty. I sincerely beg you to keep up the good work.

I love Carter, he's literally the best mom and dad and teammate. He is strong, both physically and mindwise, but he is not intimidating and dominant in a bad way. And he truly truly care for the MC. He is the only one MC could truly trust and rely on after all these things happened. 

Casey and Erebus are such a cute duo, like literally they are so wholesome and I'm really grateful I made the decision to save her from the court.

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Oh my god CONGRATULATIONS ON FINISHING THE FIRST BOOK! YOU ARE AMAZING!!! i read it firstly in last year and was hooked. 

Carter is my favorite. Mad respect for him. And even more love. That man deserves everything happy thing that could happen. 

MC is next. I love them, I love what you did with responces and reactions. Even when MC is optimistic they are not fools and aren't loose their bite.

Casey is the goal, I knew I would like her.

And I really really liked R. I love how they become more tender. Maybe it's not the right word, they still infuriating, but i found myself fond of them. Kitten, they say, and i am wisely nodding along  coz MC is truly a kitten. 

I hope you will continue to enjoy your world. Thank you so much!

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this was fantastic!!!! please i'm gonna be sick with how amazing the story and interactions were this was absolutely gorgeous i can't wait for book 2!!!!!

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Read the whole thing in three sittings 10/10 all the LIs are amazing!

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I am officially hooked and can't wait for part two!!!


Love it so much, hope you have an amazing life

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OH. MY GOD. I AM FLOORED.
Genuinely some of the best writing I've experienced!! I cannot WAIT for book 2!

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THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD???????!!!!!! 

I had to force myself to stop reading at 2:50 am because I couldn't get enough of this whole story. YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB!!!! 

The way you write, the characters, the ambience, EVERYTHING is so damn well presented I may cry out of delight 😭😭 It's been a looooong time since I've found something so worthwhile reading, I'm even not joking rn. So really THANK YOU for this such awesome experience you've created!!! 

 I can't wait for book 2 🤩

just finished binging this story and i adore it ! this is so well written and i am in love with the storyline cant wait for more!

i laugh too much

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beans

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God. I've been following since like. May ish I wanna say? Chapter 8's launch?  or maybe chapter 7 but right before 8. Anyway I absolutely adore your writing style, and your characterization is so solid like they are characters i can really get invested in. The plot is so intriguing, and I love the logistics of magic and the supernatural in your world building - explained just enough to make sense and show that there IS a logic behind it, but mysterious enough that it's like a scientist going " yea we don't know why it does that yet. crazy lol" anyway i can't wait (I can take your time and don't push yourself) for more, I'm grabbing every project with my teeth and shaking my head like a dog

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kestrel is so silly i adore him! i'm on chapter 6 right now i think >< i'll report back later...

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AHHHHH IT WAS SO GOOD!! this book is phenomenal, and i am super excited for book 2. considering how "short" it is, the world building is excellent. nothing is shoved down your throat and all the info is fed to the reader at a reasonable pace while also mixing in good moments with ROs and plot pieces! (p.s., erebus is my baby)

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excited to play :D

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looooved it. i'm very glad you're on the process of making the sequel!! can't wait:) also that last scene with rowan urrrgghhgHGhghggh. so adorable. they're the best.

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This was so good! The writing was a great balance of details and dialog. It was so immersive!

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That was amazing! I can't wait to smother Carter with familial love. He's such a great dad! Loved book 1 and I can't wait to see what you have in store for book 2.

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SLKEJRGLKJESRGB I love this story so much, and im so excited for book two. still want to kiss zora a very reasonable amount 

Cool book :)

so the personality flavor choice where you’re helping the Ro gives you snarky instead of amicable when you say “no you’re not fine”

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OMGG IT WAS SO GOODDD And Kestral I am simply in loveee

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AHHDBISNSKSDJDNDIDNJDNDJSNSJND.. I'm back with my ranting

-COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS-







1. KESTRAL WHAT THE HELL. WHY DIDN'T YOU KISS ME???? I WAS WAITING THE WHOLE CHAPTER💔 I WAS THINKING ABT YOU BROOOOO💔 AFTER U BLEW A KISS AT ME?? WHAT IS WRONG WITH U. ALL U HAD TO DO WAS GO *MWA* NKSNSJSNDJSSIEJDJJSJDNDDJKSNSJD. WHYYYYYY


2. THE WHOLE "YOU LOOK LIKE HER" SHIT AGAISNDISNJSBSJD. FREAKY SHADOW MAN I'M GONNA GET YOUR ASSSSSSSSSSSSS. TELL MEEEEEEE


3. Poor MC :( hugs. So many hugs. Pls. Comfort. Love. Hugs. 


4. YAY CASEY IS OKAY :D


5. Knewwwww I couldn't trust Zora😒.. Gonna beat her ass, regardless of her super sad back story.


6. CARTER :(((((( 


7. screaming, crying, sobbing, someone just hug MC.. The lady we look like could be our MOM💔  "don't get your hopes up" WAHDJSKSNWJS💔😭 AND THE NO MEMORY THING MAKES THAT HURTTTTTTTT FOR MEEEEEE


8. okay.. Vampire man 😏.. I see you. I see you and your nickname 😏.. 


9. FUCK THE S GUY. THE GRABBING MC AND BEATING THE SHIT OUT OF MC IS A HUGE NO. GET YO ASS AWAAYYYYY. I BETTER BE ALLOWED TO BEAT TF OUT OF THIS GUY ONE DAY. I'M GETTING HIS ASS THROUGH THE S C R E E N. 🖕🖕


10. FUCKKK THE HUNTERS, I'M GETTING THEIR ASSES TOO🖕😒

anyways I might complain more later who knows.. Anyways thanks for reading my ramblings. EXCITED FOR BOOK TWO!! LET'S GOOOO!!!!!! 

anyways, DRINK WATER LOVELY PEOPLE <3!! KEEP YOURSELF HYDRATED <3!! 

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Absolute cinema

Found this game once again and was looking thru the comments... YOU ARE HERE TOO???!

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Of course I’m here, you’ll find me in (virtually) all of the comments of good IF’s.

Out of curiosity, would you be, by any chance, e-stalking me? (Joke.. Unless?)

I mean- you'll never know (unfortunately this time it was in my recommendations and I didn't get to e-stalk anyone)

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Found a bug.  In chapter 10, upon waking up after the inciting incident for the chapter, the spade option is bugged out in this dialogue option.  I think it's just missing 2 closed square brackets near the end of the spade line.






“Kid?” Carter prompts you again and this time you come back to yourself


[[“No.”|10.38][22 +=1 ♤

“Yes. Sorry.” ♢

You raise a very tired middle finger at the old man. ♧


Edit to add:  Later, after packing for the trip:

“I told you when you were a kid that’d I keep you safe,” Carter says. “And I meant that. I still do.” - Probably supposed to be "that I'd" instead of "that'd I"

thank you!

I had this bug too :D!!

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Oh my god this was AMAZING. I had such a great time with this story and I absolutely adore the relationship between Carter and my MC. Plus that lil longing bit with Renard. My MC wants to kiss him so bad. I had the best time with this story and I'm so happy with everything and everyone. Thank you so much for sharing this.

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loved it OMG.And aaahhh i was so excited to kiss the kestrel just for him to forfeit.dude. the audacity. still loved it .Will be waiting for book 2.

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Omggggg, I'm just finishing reading the new chapter and this is sooooooooo good. Aaaaaa I can't wait for book 2, love your writing style and how the characters development went so smoothly throughout the story. Amazing work!!!


Thank you so much for the experience and I'm looking forward to seeing the next journey we'll be having.

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This was such a great read! Also, kudos to you, Author, cause damn do you work fast.

Love this, can't wait to see what's waiting for us in Book 2. 

Hope you're doing well and take care!

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#BUG REPORT#

Turn 519 - snarky/sardonic answer not working.

Turn 535 - irritable/stubborn answer, loops back to "Carter suddenly look tired. Older. He rubs a hand over his face, ...".

Turn 552 - Wrong pronoun, "She watches you for a moment more.", should be he.

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ayy new update, I'm happy.

Today is another wonderful day :)

Hope that you take care of yourself, I'm yet to play the update, but I already know that I will love it.

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woah looks like i found this at a good time bc theres a fresh update lmao

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I feel like I looked away from this IF for a minute and you dropped 5 chapters and scampered away! This has been a great read, and well worth the wait! I'll be keeping my eye out for Book 2!

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